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Mortdefides
01-10-2009, 05:09 PM
Your call

In the cold winter night
the snow falls around the lunar beams
And I shiver from the sight
of your calm face in my sweet dreams.
Your lips linger on mine,
your eyes glitter affectionately like gold.
Your kiss, silent and divine,
bursts in me with love that is never told.
Snowflakes dance in peace,
and I stand there, surrounded by snow.
Dreaming endlessly of these
caresses of yours, I shatter and fall.
Where are your eyes?
Do they seek me in the infinite gloom?
Is my love mere lies
or is it all this my heart’s eternal doom?
Oh, come to me, my goddess
and embrace my lonely and troubled soul
for your love is like a lotus
That is always in me and will always call.

26th December 2008

P.S.:Just a small piece of poetry, written for my girlfriend :blush: :) .

Dark Muse
01-11-2009, 03:29 AM
This was beautiful. Your girlfrind should be quite happy with it. It had wonderful feeling. Sensual and tander.

Xillus_Xavier
01-11-2009, 03:57 AM
The meter is erratic on this piece but it's still quite good.
I really like the rhymes you've put together here,
and all-in-all, it's an enjoyable poem to read.
Well done on this one.

LostPrincess13
01-11-2009, 04:17 AM
Wow, poetry seems to be old-fashioned for the guys of today's generation...
Your girlfriend is one lucky girl...:D *two thumbs up*