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lucidnightmares
01-08-2009, 07:38 AM
OK so they may not be too good
but i need to write something, and this was a great was to kill a few minutes.





as the last man falls
the universe breaths slowly
a sigh of relief


one can never know
what one`s self is comprised of
till they cease to be


my mind is riddled
all things are in question
i fear the answers


the seasons fading
they meld into each other
as man struggles on


why am i afraid
as the dark void awaits me
frightened, by nothing...

alakungfu
01-08-2009, 02:17 PM
I like the third one. What is more difficult, after all, than insight into oneself?

lucidnightmares
01-08-2009, 03:55 PM
thanks alot
more than anything that`s been in my mind, just in back bugging me when i try to sleep
so this really helped me relieve that pressure on myself and i`m glad you enjoyed it.