Ulalle
02-27-2005, 01:49 PM
The Consort
Underneath the illusion, much, much, much
Below frustration and destruction,
There do I dwell;
Underneath the floor of the room
Of utter despair do I exist
Pulsating.
I am the primordial womb chamber
That gave all those unconscious gods of
Creation an order and space to
Exist and a duration of being by which to proceed.
I am their energizing force, their
Power of limitation and force
Of activity;
See, Look!
When awe and fascination are
At play, there, respectfully am
I admired.
Can you adore me and be
Non-attached?
Would you allow yourself the
Constant shock and confusion
Arising perpetually out of my
Rarity?
The vessel of all transformations,
I excite marvels of ordered
Chaos to come, to go
To amaze, dazzle and astonish,
The abstraction of cosmic life
And unity I exist before
Existence and being indigenous
To this life I am an old
Woman for eternity virgin
I must be obeyed, for I
Am the reverence of life
To life, the primordial awe
Of that which cannot be
Surprised.
The ultimate witness, I observe
Reflect and attest to my
Kind only.
My Kind is called Love,
The consort of intelligence.
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that is a poem I wrote many years ago and have just revised it, would love to hear comments on its coherency.
thanks,
Ulalle
Underneath the illusion, much, much, much
Below frustration and destruction,
There do I dwell;
Underneath the floor of the room
Of utter despair do I exist
Pulsating.
I am the primordial womb chamber
That gave all those unconscious gods of
Creation an order and space to
Exist and a duration of being by which to proceed.
I am their energizing force, their
Power of limitation and force
Of activity;
See, Look!
When awe and fascination are
At play, there, respectfully am
I admired.
Can you adore me and be
Non-attached?
Would you allow yourself the
Constant shock and confusion
Arising perpetually out of my
Rarity?
The vessel of all transformations,
I excite marvels of ordered
Chaos to come, to go
To amaze, dazzle and astonish,
The abstraction of cosmic life
And unity I exist before
Existence and being indigenous
To this life I am an old
Woman for eternity virgin
I must be obeyed, for I
Am the reverence of life
To life, the primordial awe
Of that which cannot be
Surprised.
The ultimate witness, I observe
Reflect and attest to my
Kind only.
My Kind is called Love,
The consort of intelligence.
----------
that is a poem I wrote many years ago and have just revised it, would love to hear comments on its coherency.
thanks,
Ulalle