I have no dreams only nightmares

[ls12lb]

thanks for all ur support people :-)

[ls12lb]

any feedback greatly appreciated. I used to write all the time and im trying to get back into it again but its proving difficult...thanks :-)

[hoope]

hi there,
this is really a well written article.. i enjoyed reading it.. Yet i can feel the sadness in it

Wlc here , and hope to read more from you.

[ls12lb]

thank you so much,really gave me confidence getting one compliment...i'll have a go again :-)

[monicaroxanne]

any feedback greatly appreciated. I used to write all the time and im trying to get back into it again but its proving difficult...thanks :-)

Hi :).

Do you mind if I ask what sort of things you used to write?

[lupe]

"Memories are the nightmares of insomnia" - Alejo Carpentier

[JBI]

I'm not sure you want feedback - the thing reads like watered down Poe - one emotion, one thought, one direction - no growth or development, merely repetition.

[ls12lb]

I'm not sure you want feedback - the thing reads like watered down Poe - one emotion, one thought, one direction - no growth or development, merely repetition.

its an insight into one feeling within one moment not an entire novel...your comment sounds like watered down poe, one thought, one direction, no growth or development.

[MattG]

So.. Welcome to Litnet! :)

[aBIGsheep]

its an insight into one feeling within one moment not an entire novel...your comment sounds like watered down poe, one thought, one direction, no growth or development.

Don't get your panties in a bunch. You wrote something to be judged and critiqued -- he wrote something to make reassess yourself.

[JacobF]

its an insight into one feeling within one moment not an entire novel...your comment sounds like watered down poe, one thought, one direction, no growth or development.

What an immature reaction. If you're going to post your work at least be prepared for criticism, positive or not. But, since this is the introductions forum, welcome to lit net.

[Silas Thorne]

If you are going to act like that, maybe you should write in your next posting:

'This is my writing. I don't need to improve any of it. Please feel free to write any comments, but I will only accept positive ones. '

Sorry if my words seem harsh, I'm just being honest. :)

Oh, and welcome to the Litnet forums!

[jon1jt]

If you are going to act like that, maybe you should write in your next posting:

'This is my writing. I don't need to improve any of it. Please feel free to write any comments, but I will only accept positive ones. '

Sorry if my words seem harsh, I'm just being honest. :)

Oh, and welcome to the Litnet forums!

I agree. Honesty is a very very hard thing for some here.

I think many writers don't want honesty, they want to go thru life being compared to Keats or Shelley, or maybe Louise Gluck and that other cheesedoodle Perotta. But what they forget is that Keats and Shelley are dead, and so will be Gluck and Perotta. And when pride and mystery begin to wane and the elder worlds of commonsense, honesty, and sanity return (right before their own deaths) they'll realize that all previous thoughtworlds are eligible for throwover. Better late than never, eh?

[ls12lb]

its funny how a bit of drama gets people expressing their opinions


all about the hype.

i appreciate your feedback and your welcomes.

[aBIGsheep]

Get over yourself.