short poem

[lucidnightmares]

can one write of anything when everything is bland?
can one create beauty from the devils crooked hand?

can one completely know oneself without oneself complying?
can one live off of memories alone or would one be simply dieing?

is one a whole all ones life, or is one simply lacking?
is one better off to defend, or should one be attacking?

one can question all of these and never know the answer
but for one to know the most important of things...
one must simply ask her

[duskmuse]

Hello

That was an interesting little poem. I wish I had more to say but it might be a good thing becuase I didn't see anything wrong with it. The whole idea of asking questions was nice, it grabbed my attention right away. I was curious to see where it was going.
Thanks for sharing and good luck with writing
-Dusk Muse

[Delta40]

I like the idea of to answer all these questions one should simply ask 'her' I immediately thought of the wife who has an answer for everything and the pussy whooped husband! I don't know why but that was the image put in my head. Needless to say the poem became lighthearted and entertaining for me when you as the author might not have that intention. Nevertheless, I like it.