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Shurtugal
12-25-2008, 08:22 PM
I really like doing this and i find that it helps me with my writing. Just look at this picture and describe it. Maybe add a story behind it. do what ever, just try to explain the picture! i, as stated above, find this very useful...
if you have your own picture you want put a picture up, just PM me and i'll most likely put it up. please, don't put it up on here yourself because that might get a little hecktic if everyone is doing it.

here's a picture.
http://www.online-literature.com/forums/picture.php?albumid=340&pictureid=2457

librarius_qui
12-26-2008, 11:22 AM
pink


:crash:

Shurtugal
12-26-2008, 08:46 PM
i guess you don't like the idea.

librarius_qui
12-26-2008, 08:51 PM
I like it! Even if alone, I'd write a little, most ev'ryday, and it'd get more words than "pink" ...

I'm beginning to pay attention at the birds around ...

But your remark may be relevant. Maybe, people around don't like much the idea.

Or maybe it's the holliday ... Try to wait a while longer ;)


Libri~

Shurtugal
12-26-2008, 09:00 PM
kk. shall do. thanks for the advise.

librarius_qui
12-27-2008, 01:09 PM
Pink, with a touch of yellow ...
Does the sun rise or set?, wanders a bird
gliding around ...

Shurtugal
12-27-2008, 02:58 PM
argh... i should have done an example, but i thought i had made it clear what i was talking about... guess not.

Example:
The sun was setting, making the sky a wonderful orange color with streeks of pink and purple. Zoe flopped herself on the ground and, pulling her knees up to her chest, rested her head on her knees. the breezed played with her long, brown hair. She staired out at the see which layed before. I don't love you. She heard his voice say. She shuddered and wrapped her pink dress with white lacing closer around her legs. Crying of of gulls filled the air, but she did not hear them. all she heard was his voice-- I don't love you. why didn't he love her? She had done everything in her capability to show her dedication and commitment. But still he said, "I don't love you." A tear now rested on her cheek. Everything she had done... it was all became empty and pointless when he said, "I don't love you." But I love you! She thought with bitterness. The pain she had experianced to be told that she was unloved. She had always been unloved but he seemed like he could love her. She knew he could love her if he tried, if she showed him that she cared and wanted to be loved. But he didn't. He didn't love her.
Slowly, she stood up, the wind grabbed her skirt and wipped it in front of her. Had she heard right? There it was again. I love you. A mysterious voice said. She looked around her widly, but she could see no one. Look at the sunset. Spoke the voice. As soon as she did she saw a face, so kind and friendly. Her tears stopped flowing. I love you. the voice said again. I've always loved you. I called for you, but your adoration for him closed your eyes to my love. My eternal love. A love that will never die no matter what you do. She had frozen at the edge of the cliff. "Take me away." She heard her voice say. The face in the sky smiled. Come, child. You have suffered far to long. She looked at the raging sea below her and she was not afraid of it. She was going to a place of peace... eternal peace. Before her mind could stop her, she lept of the cliff. The wind rushed around her and then, there was nothing. She opened her eyes and her world was a brilliant white. The face now had a body and He was walking toward her, a silvar mist moving around Him with each step He took. She began running toward Him. He loved her. But just before she was quiet in His arms, she stopped short, fear gripping her. What if He didn't love her? What if she had to do something again. Fear not child, there is nothing for you to fear. You never had to do anything to earn it. you always had it. But I could not give it to you until you could give the most important thing to you. Your trust. You had given it to everything else, and all that was left of it was torn and battered. But I loved you, and that small peice of trust that you had was what gave you the love that i always held for you.

librarius_qui
12-30-2008, 11:20 PM
Pink, with a touch of yellow ...
Does the sun rise or set?, wanders a bird
gliding around ...


Pink
with a touch of yellow
Does the sun rise or set?
I wander
gliding around with Martin & Meelis ...
"O, look: a girl! Let's talk to her!", says Martin
"No! Let humans be" Meelis is frightened always
She looks sad, the girl, think I --