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JTParreira
12-22-2008, 04:09 PM
I touch up the sky
from a gentle mirror
within the stream.

J T Parreira

Dark Muse
12-22-2008, 04:12 PM
This is beautiful.

blp
12-22-2008, 07:28 PM
It's nice.

I should point out, 'touch up', at least among English speakers in England, has a sexual connotation. I mean, you might want that, but just thought I should let you know.