“In the night”

[Mr.K]

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[Furbla]

Great work on the poetry.
The sentence structure pauses and begins magnificently and the flowing nature of the piece is agreeable.
Well done, I enjoyed this piece :)

[cogs]

the cigarette, wolves, and bees descriptions are interesting. dark poem, but good.

[malcolmx]

:thumbs_upthis is nice.well done

[MorpheusSandman]

I also really liked this one. It has a dark, edgy, almost cynically nihilistic tone... but I like that sort of thing. Something that would be at home in a Coen Bros. movie.

[Mr.K]

thank you