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Dark Muse
12-08-2008, 05:18 PM
Aftermath

The metallic taste of blood still remains
eyes blur over, head slipping in a daze
a remembrance of both losses and gains
regret, fear, anger, hate all in a maze
why forever left to suffer these pains
reality and nightmares blend in a haze
so bitter the taste of victory
when so many are left to misery

cogs
12-10-2008, 03:10 AM
yes, war is hell... i like the title, and victory at odds with misery

Shadow Poet
12-10-2008, 01:10 PM
Hello Dark Muse

This was quite vivid. I enjoyed that aspect most about it. Superbly done!

Dark Muse
12-10-2008, 01:27 PM
Thank you