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[Kawthar K.]

Caprice, caprice!
Oh spare me, oh please!
Mr.Ominous Nefarious Beast
Why I wonder why you look at me as if I were a feast
I loathe how you stare at me till your own stares turn you obese
I am the prey, I am the diseased
I'm washing away until nothing remains of me but the least
A saga of a Metropolis that is yet to be seized

Excuse my derogatory way of speech
But my point might be out of your intellectual reach, Mr.Beast!

Valor, valor!
Talk to me, please, senor!
There's no need to tell me what you mean in a semaphore!

Boisterous laughter will lead to a disaster
So step a side and make way for the glib master

My words come out impromptu

I am numero uno, I am numero uno.

[mazHur]

there is quite a spontaneity...
use of shorter lines to convey the idea could do even better

[Kawthar K.]

Hmmm, you think?
Can you give me an example?

I've not studied poetry writing whatsoever
I'd be glad if you would give an example on the usage of shorter sentences
I've tried but I cant think of anything

[mazHur]

Hmmm, you think?
Can you give me an example?

I've not studied poetry writing whatsoever
I'd be glad if you would give an example on the usage of shorter sentences
I've tried but I cant think of anything

Hi
It's so easy ! To start with you should have a look at the nursery rhymes (no joking!) ,,,read the ones which you like,,try to follow its rhythm. Practice this for one two or more times,,,until you feel the 'kick' of it. Now you can start writing your own poem or poems on this and other rhythms provided you have pre-formed an idea in your mind.

Okay??
all the best
Maz:)

[Kawthar K.]

AH! Lols. Thank you, Maz!=)
Will do!

[Shadow Poet]

I liked the way the lines were drawn out. It gave me much to anticipate while reading.

[Kawthar K.]

Why, thank you!
=)