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Kawthar K.
12-05-2008, 01:23 PM
I wrote this when I was bored, but the name "Viva Vicious" was my insperation
I had read an abstract poem of a serine woman, so I decided to take the time and write this as a tribute to the writer, my friend.
Please take the time to give me your feedback
I've been used to writing 3 years ago but have stopped since then.
Now I'm back to writing, so yeah. Please do take the time to comment my poem and I'd gladly comment whatever you want too!

Her name is Viva Vicious
She's impure, she's malicious
She is vigorous and ambitious
In a quest to destroy your ambitions
Her dreamy arctic-blue eyes stare at the sky
Making you sink deep into her true lies
Throwing your love away as if it were a dice
Playing with your heart, fooling you; not once, not twice, but thrice
Lips soft and tender, colored bloody-red
Like a strawberry so sweet, but beware for she's about to start this blood-shed
Her hair is beautifully long, colored ivory-white
But she is not pretty, she hasn't a pleasant sight
There is no inner beauty that Viva Vicious has to hide
So step aside, and let the truth abide
A heart of a heartless woman, stigmatic, ebony-black
So cold and frigid, emotions are what this woman lack
Now watch her as she walks away giving you her back and nothing more
And think again.. Is this the woman you once adored??