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AliciaLoh
12-01-2008, 06:59 AM
This is one of my own poems. Comment, please!:yawnb:


Truly Yours

Why is it, that I feel nauseous every time,
I hear you say the word…?
Why does my pulse race faster than a rocket off to the moon,
When you say it,
Even though I know it will never be,
Mine and mine alone to hear?

To have you hold me tight,
In your arms,
Gazing fervently into my deep brown eyes,
As you whisper the sweetest of nothings in my ears,
Would be my sweetest of dreams come true,

‘Cause I’ll know then,
That I’m really something special to you,
Someone to always hold close to your heart,

To have you call me by that one single word…,
Would truly be Another Day In Paradise to me,
‘Cause you gave me back the hope I’d long lost,
So To Be With You would be being one again,
With all my lost and forgotten hope. ~

AliciaLoh
12-01-2008, 10:02 AM
come on. i need comments. i worked really hard on this. oh, and don't bother copying it. its being copyrighted right now.

JoRavenJo
12-02-2008, 12:16 AM
This is like a hopeless love poem..
Its pretty.. And I like it =]
Nice job write more^_-
Plz read my thread on personal poetry and utter darkness poems in this catagory ..=)

AliciaLoh
12-02-2008, 02:29 AM
This is like a hopeless love poem..
Its pretty.. And I like it =]
Nice job write more^_-
Plz read my thread on personal poetry and utter darkness poems in this catagory ..=)

Haha... it's MEANT to be a love poem. Not sure about the hopeless part though...

I've written quite a number... I'll post them.

Ok!

JoRavenJo
12-06-2008, 03:30 AM
haha sorry im just negative and I saw it as hopeless