JoRavenJo
11-30-2008, 03:56 AM
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I wrote this in Dispair and this poem is almost evrything I wanted it to become; it may be the only poem I like that I've written.
Title:Transparent World
Current mood: melancholy
Category: Writing and Poetry
Vapors flow through thine eyes,
And a fine mist goes through my heart.
Radical voices and nautical spirals pop in my mind.
Nonsense and verbal language is ejected.
Un-human madness is created through my perseption,
And the demon is just toying around with my logic.
Vibrant colors and winds of magic transfer through my visuals.
Intense images of destruction, despair, and eerie figures haunt my world.
This is the transparent world,
And I am put into its witness unknowledgeable.
Defeated, grey world of nothing.
It is foolish to say Its not there.
It is foolish to leave yourself unfair.
Defeated one of nothing.
Waking me up,
Dead asleep.
Drowning my ears out with my mind,
It kills me.
A figure of torment lies behind me.
A dead doorbell chimes with its screeching cries.
It was a glimpse.
Now I see them all the time;
I will hear them all the time.
Dawn, I will bare the eyes of the transparent world.
Again Defeated,
Slain, Destroyed, and Devistated.
Sorrowful,
And down in the blackest pits.
Try telling them this,
Try releasing your feelings that cant be heard.
They cant be understood, or even taken to thought.
It hurts your heart,
It burns your soul,
And aches over and over and over in my heart.
I know both worlds are similar.
Everybody Spits at me,
Everybody hates at me.
Every time I cry its the same.
Intensity of blood comes through my body.
Intensity of hate comes through life.
Intensity of Insanity.
Transparent visuals,
Transparent world.
It all makes me sick,
Strangles me beaten;
Leaves me dry and dead.
This place I can't explain with words,
But I can tell you what it feels like.
This time its different.
You won't believe anything about this place;
Its Crazy
Just like me. -Me
I wrote this in Dispair and this poem is almost evrything I wanted it to become; it may be the only poem I like that I've written.
Title:Transparent World
Current mood: melancholy
Category: Writing and Poetry
Vapors flow through thine eyes,
And a fine mist goes through my heart.
Radical voices and nautical spirals pop in my mind.
Nonsense and verbal language is ejected.
Un-human madness is created through my perseption,
And the demon is just toying around with my logic.
Vibrant colors and winds of magic transfer through my visuals.
Intense images of destruction, despair, and eerie figures haunt my world.
This is the transparent world,
And I am put into its witness unknowledgeable.
Defeated, grey world of nothing.
It is foolish to say Its not there.
It is foolish to leave yourself unfair.
Defeated one of nothing.
Waking me up,
Dead asleep.
Drowning my ears out with my mind,
It kills me.
A figure of torment lies behind me.
A dead doorbell chimes with its screeching cries.
It was a glimpse.
Now I see them all the time;
I will hear them all the time.
Dawn, I will bare the eyes of the transparent world.
Again Defeated,
Slain, Destroyed, and Devistated.
Sorrowful,
And down in the blackest pits.
Try telling them this,
Try releasing your feelings that cant be heard.
They cant be understood, or even taken to thought.
It hurts your heart,
It burns your soul,
And aches over and over and over in my heart.
I know both worlds are similar.
Everybody Spits at me,
Everybody hates at me.
Every time I cry its the same.
Intensity of blood comes through my body.
Intensity of hate comes through life.
Intensity of Insanity.
Transparent visuals,
Transparent world.
It all makes me sick,
Strangles me beaten;
Leaves me dry and dead.
This place I can't explain with words,
But I can tell you what it feels like.
This time its different.
You won't believe anything about this place;
Its Crazy
Just like me. -Me