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Dark Muse
11-21-2008, 03:50 PM
Fairy Spirit

Spellbound beauty dances in the shadows
with lovers bond
in her song
she is
fae

cogs
11-24-2008, 05:57 PM
this is great! here's how i would change it lol:


sparkling in the forest shadows
dancing beauty sings spells of lovers' bond
matchmaking muse
she is fae

scrapingthesun
11-26-2008, 07:41 PM
You certainly caught my attention -- my favorite artist and my favorite author both in your signature -- and your poem ain't bad either.