Bailout Blues

[Cellar Door]

Four red bills and a blue
Bank's gonna come after you
'Cause most of your bills is past due

Two credit card applications
Eight collections calls;
Even my rhyme scheme
ain't working at all

Listen mister
I got Jesus on my checks
So I'm a pretty good guy, you can tell,
It's just that McDonald's doesn't
pay that well

they said get good grades
they said go to college
this was their recipe
so I followed it to a "T"

Now who's got a bailout for me?

[symphony]

Heh nice one! :D
And i think your rhyme scheme works just fine! ;)

[Cellar Door]

glad you liked it symphony! sadly, a little too true now a days, though...

[blp]

Maybe you could add, 'They said, get sub-prime mortgage and a 401K'. You could probably even make it rhyme.