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diamantis
11-19-2008, 10:21 AM
Completeness

Persuaded they were of searching,
Their completion in order to find,
But they should not at all mind,
For completed from birth is mankind.



Fearless

All strange things used to fill them with fear,
But all they needed was bringing them near,
For what they had only to see,
How familiar the strangest of things can really be.



Time

Creation and decay,
Have showed them the way,
To what does not fade away,
To the one and the whole that is complete,
That all seen or unseen is part of it.

cogs
11-19-2008, 11:19 PM
these are like riddles, i see... i'm left wondering, though, why or how is mankind completed, and why or how are the strangest things familiar? i like the phrasing you used in each poem. i also like that they were brief. thank you