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lsmit4
11-17-2008, 10:19 PM
Don't read this poem
it was not meant to be read.
A poem with no future,
a dark past.
Every word contains poison.
A toxic symphony in your brain.
STOP READING!!
It Bleeds remorse and anguish.
Suffocates you.
Drenches your soul in fire.
Breaks your hollow bones.
Sears your eyes closed.
Disintegrates your will.
Read swift and escape
with only burns.
Read swift and escape
with your life. [CENTER]

romantic novel
11-19-2008, 12:37 PM
Great poem...I love it

cogs
11-19-2008, 11:12 PM
i like it's energy... i think it could have an object, like its 'dark past' expounded and showing us the danger to ourselves. it's also humorous and foreboding, i was like, 'what, is there a virus when i click on it or something?'. thank you

lsmit4
11-25-2008, 08:17 PM
yeah I feel ya, thanks for the feedback ;)