The Lovers

[Dark Muse]

The Lovers

She
watched the
shadows pass
as the rain fell
listening to sad songs
play on the radio
slipping into her sorrow
forever lost in emptiness
the darkness encroaches, closing in
her eyes close bit by bit, her breath escapes
while on a distant plain far far away
the sadness fell like a guillotine
a splash of blood stains the marble
vacant eyes stare to the sky
forever a starless night
no more words spoken
worlds apart
and yet so
close is
He

[romantic novel]

Amazing......

It profoundly describes the feeling of longing and love

good job

[Dark Muse]

Thank you

[eyemaker]

wow! this is a total "wow"!:) I really admire the way you wrote this DM. profound yet striking.. Another exquisite poem it really is.;)

[thegitksan]

gently sad, and the shape of the poem very like a drop of water. A teardrop perhaps? very sad.

[Dark Muse]

Thank you both