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wagravity
11-14-2008, 04:19 PM
Beads, yours or mine
Who knows? Who cares?
You're drippin, soaking wet
As am I, as we are

Taste of salt
Taste of skin
Scent of sin lures the room
Yet to wed but you love my name

Scream it louder
Unsteady arms bare weight
It's time to change
To purchase a few more minutes

10 more pass, every second's been counted
The night's at its end
Our bodies were on the same clock
It's passion that let's it happen

lsmit4
11-17-2008, 09:55 PM
wow, i really liked this one. Great job, good descriptive word play.

eyemaker
11-18-2008, 12:19 AM
The imagery is nice! i liked it..;)