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Dark Muse
11-14-2008, 04:09 PM
Fallen Leaves
Fallen leaves
are like tears
scattered across
the Earth
As the tears
within my soul
for our love
like a winter season
Waiting until
at last it may
reach full bloom
wagravity
11-14-2008, 04:21 PM
short and sweet and get's your point across. i like this poem. so simple and impactful. well done.
wagravity
11-14-2008, 04:22 PM
short, sweet and gets your point across. i like this poem, it's simple yet impactful. well done
Dark Muse
11-14-2008, 04:53 PM
Thank you
Pensive
11-15-2008, 03:53 AM
short and sweet and get's your point across. i like this poem. so simple and impactful. well done.
Couldn't have put it better myself. :)
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