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Dark Muse
11-14-2008, 04:09 PM
Fallen Leaves

Fallen leaves
are like tears
scattered across
the Earth

As the tears
within my soul
for our love
like a winter season

Waiting until
at last it may
reach full bloom

wagravity
11-14-2008, 04:21 PM
short and sweet and get's your point across. i like this poem. so simple and impactful. well done.

wagravity
11-14-2008, 04:22 PM
short, sweet and gets your point across. i like this poem, it's simple yet impactful. well done

Dark Muse
11-14-2008, 04:53 PM
Thank you

Pensive
11-15-2008, 03:53 AM
short and sweet and get's your point across. i like this poem. so simple and impactful. well done.

Couldn't have put it better myself. :)