Hi heres a crap poem i wrote

[bennywaters]

mast-pond

sounding pitch
pickling rows
mast-pond ditch seldom sown

saturation vat
teredo worm
casts contained aft and stern

a blackening piece
sunk to heavy suspension
falls into silent regimentation

[JBI]

You're right - it is crap. Seriously, why bother posting it if you self-acknowledge its mediocrity.

[armenian]

^ self-acknowledge that you sound like an ***

[bennywaters]

I will not accept criticism from a walking anachronism.

[JBI]

You criticized yourself, I was just pointing out that you call your poetry crap, yet expect us to read it and say something different.

[JBI]

^ self-acknowledge that you sound like an ***

Yes, well, I probably am an ***(sp?)

[bennywaters]

Of course you are right.

[1n50mn14]

Gah, I've already been over this on the short story board today... if it's not written with passion, what's the point of posting it, and why do you care if you receive an honest criticism or not?

You've already said 'crap' so I'm not going to criticise something that you don't even care about.