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MissSpoon
11-08-2008, 01:35 PM
The Spring flowers bloom,
as my heart does too..
For this one speciale boy,
who doesn't make me blue..

The Autumn leaves comes to view,
my love just as beautiful..
He is the only one,
who makes life bearable..

As Winter winds blow,
and snowflakes fall to earth..
I see my prince again,
and a new love comes to birth..

The summer sun shines,
warming our hearts..
It's rays connecting us,
so we are never apart..

These are the four seasons of love,
which loved ones take as guides..
Life goes on as long as there is love,
and from it,no one can ever hide..

In the seasons of love
lies the true meaning of a lovers heart..
I know because I've created them,
and I feel them all at once in my own heart..

Be Gentle Now.. :)

Dark Muse
11-09-2008, 01:29 AM
This was very tender and romantic, and I really liked the idea behind it. Particuarly the first 4 stanzas

romantic novel
11-09-2008, 09:11 AM
This is really amazing.

The use of the image of seasons with love is really really great.

As earth colours with the beauty of the 4 seasons..so does our heart


I really like it:)

MissSpoon
11-09-2008, 10:35 AM
Thank you both for your kind words.. :)

V.Jayalakshmi
11-09-2008, 10:40 AM
Dear Miss Spoon,

Yes, it was nice.Congrats.

RG57
11-09-2008, 03:22 PM
I like your writing, I haven't read a good love poem for ages and this one is good.

MissSpoon
11-10-2008, 10:47 AM
Thank you for reading! :)