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planet earth
11-06-2008, 02:59 AM
Kill yourself

Where am I from, where am I going, why am I here?
I need an answer. Would anyone give me a listening ear?
Is this life an illusion, or is it real?
Who am I a dead corpse or a living life that can see and feel?
Why do this world’s pleasures to me appeal?
But then they hurt me, a wound so grave they never seem to heal
What is everything all about?
Is it of belief or is it of doubt?
Someone answer me I want to scream and shout
No, I will get my pistol, and with a shot, I am out.

Don’t my dear friend
There is something I know, that you do not comprehend
Don’t simply put your life to an end
Know the truth and illusions with it don’t blend
Please tell me, or to death myself I have condemned
Save my life, for it anything I will spend

Kill yourself, but don’t commit suicide
Keep alive the lit spirit inside
Wake your heart up and its eyes keep open wide
Lead your soul to its innate guide
Trace day and night, do they ever coincide?
How morning has sight and how night managed to hide

Look upon the sun, the moon, the stars and skies
The hills, the palms, the rivers and the land that lies
The bird that within the sky with two wings flies
With one glance realize how everything unifies
But nothing remains living, everything dies
While during its life, the Life-giver it glorifies
Endure your pain when He you tries
And trust in Him, the Omniscient, the Wise
For all the matter is mercy in disguise

For everyone He gave about Him clues
And allowed us to reject or Him choose
His universe he made for us to use
Not to forget Him and with brains He granted us refuse
Learn about Him during the world’s short cruise
Wonder inside you and around you, all this is whose?



Wherever you look, there you will He find
Use your heart’s eye and don’t be blind
Know Him to love Him and not to suspect Him with your mind
With choice he honoured you and called you man-kind
If you don’t find him in everything, know you are a way behind

During night look at the light of the moon
And try to stare at the burning sun at noon
Don’t think a lot, there is no time, the appointment is so soon
Yes, with Him the First and Last, the One and Only
Alone, Everlasting but never lonely

With love fly to him with the wings of hope and fear
Search within your veins, for He is that near
Here he is, His presence is crystal clear
Through his creations, he certainly did appear
What is that I see? Is it a tear?
Out of recognition, has He become so dear?

Yes with Him our relationship is very true
From dark to light, you are coming through
Yes, it is Him, if not then who??
He is that common sense that within you grew
Who with colours painted the grass green and the sky blue

To Him belonged this wonderful landscape
Ask not about His age, entity or shape
Simply submit to Him and to Him escape
For ever since, everything was recorded on video-like tape
Always Awake for He could never sleep
His eyes are upon us to safe us keep

He created everything since the pen of fate
That wrote everything since then to this very date
According to his destiny nothing came earlier, nothing late
And postponed judgement till the day of weight
Sense Him, so Solemn, so Merciful, so Great

Surrender to Him with all his Might
Yearn for his meeting and being at his sight
Make Him your company during night
And be at his mentioning through daylight
To Him keep close and tight
And be certain that you have now reached what is right
When your heart with Him becomes bright
And its colour turns from burned black to wiped white


When I feel dead then become alive
When I breathe oxygen after an exhausting dive
When I reach home after a long drive
When I kill myself, while to Him I strive
Here he is, At Him I finally did arrive





By: Weaam Mahmoud

ShadowFire
11-08-2008, 03:25 PM
WOW...I think that is all I can say. The power, the meaning, the form, the thought...all of it is wonderful. Thank you for sharing.

planet earth
11-09-2008, 01:57 AM
Shadow Fire

Thank you so much for being the first one to comment

and thank you very much for your comment, but believe me I really believe it is the Power of Truth. THis is what our religion Islam, tells us about Allah whom we believe in and believe me, this is nothing compared to the grandeur of the Quran written in heavenly Divinity in Arabic

Thanks again

mercy_mankind
12-10-2008, 06:46 AM
Actually it is very wonderful and amazing poem, strong meanings and feelings.
i read it twice, and i want to read it again :)
Allah bless you.

Shadow Poet
12-10-2008, 01:17 PM
As I read it became evident that you've a creativity that really makes one become attentive to your every word. I can't say there was anything I disliked here. Great stuff!

cogs
12-10-2008, 05:51 PM
at first i thought this was going to be another depressing kill me poem, but you brightened up. i really believe its sentiment, about dying to self in order to live for god. this part sounds like it can be taken two ways: "Wherever you look, there you will He find". but i knew what you meant. i'm not islam, but i understand what you're saying, and i like it.

planet earth
12-15-2008, 03:20 PM
Actually it is very wonderful and amazing poem, strong meanings and feelings.
i read it twice, and i want to read it again :)
Allah bless you.

Thank you Mercy for your lovely comment
If you know Moez Masoud, I guess you do. He was discussing the subject and I like this contemplation very much so I did not sleep until I wrote it

planet earth
12-15-2008, 03:22 PM
As I read it became evident that you've a creativity that really makes one become attentive to your every word. I can't say there was anything I disliked here. Great stuff!

I don't know what to say truly, and believe me, I know its good not because I wrote it, but because Who it is written about is very very very good

planet earth
12-15-2008, 03:34 PM
at first i thought this was going to be another depressing kill me poem, but you brightened up. i really believe its sentiment, about dying to self in order to live for god. this part sounds like it can be taken two ways: "Wherever you look, there you will He find". but i knew what you meant. i'm not islam, but i understand what you're saying, and i like it.

yes, I know the title is quite shocking but that's what is important about it I think.

I am glad you understood what I meant although you are not a muslim.