JoeNamath
11-02-2008, 03:57 PM
This was my first attempt at writing, I'm looking to improve, I'd like some comments/criticisms, whatever it is it's appreciated
1n50mn14
11-12-2008, 09:34 AM
Extremely evocative and well written, especially for a first attempt! Your plot gets somewhat lost in your imagery, at times.
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