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dibyendra
10-28-2008, 11:16 PM
I had lost the hope that I'll remain alive when
the lips turned blue, and my mind went numb.
When I woke up, murmuring fuzzy words
in a timid voice, I found myself in your arms,
and then you sighed, glistening your eyes,
held me in your arms compassionately
like I was a new born baby,
and your quivering hands, they were restless,
pampering upon my face, showering love
and sympathy, while I was speechless,
beholding, with an awe, your tear-stained face,
commingled with vivid emotions.
With your warm kiss before I closed my eyes,
in your loving arms, I silently plunged
into the world of colorful dreams.

qimissung
11-01-2008, 12:53 AM
This is so beautiful and may I say, sweet. You have perfectly captured an intense, intimate moment between two who love.

dibyendra
11-02-2008, 11:23 AM
This is so beautiful and may I say, sweet. You have perfectly captured an intense, intimate moment between two who love.

Thank you very much, Qimi! I am really glad to hear that. :)

Justin Rockwell
11-02-2008, 04:04 PM
Nice poem, I like the flow of it alot. I like how you kept it simple too.

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