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Louisos
10-28-2008, 10:48 AM
Wings

Soaring through the road in the backseat of the car,
two to a seat but you are on my lap-
cold whirrs through the window
but the music keeps us warm-
it's wings are wrapped around us
like yours are wrapped around me.

A feeling in my chest starts to erupt,
a flower blossoming, but its petals are tainted-
it spreads, through my body,
like your wings do when you fly-
but your wings are tainted too.

The haze starts to disappear as we come back down-
the car lands once more, firmly on the ground.
The cold starts to caress me as the doors are thrown
wide-
the feeling dissolves,
like your wings into the night.

Cheers,
Louis

maraki16
10-29-2008, 10:58 AM
beautiful poem louis!

Louisos
10-29-2008, 07:01 PM
Thanks :)
Got to love Opium :)