Beauty

[ahsiam]

a vintage moment
within eyes- proportioned perfectly
in an integration of tissues-yet unveiled;
obscurity is its ultimacy,
where costancy is a change.

[symphony]

love it love it love it!

[ahsiam]

Looks like you really loved it! :D Thank you sym for your precious comment...

[firewrathed]

a vintage moment
within eyes- proportioned perfectly
in an integration of tissues-yet unveiled;
obscurity is its ultimacy,
where costancy is a change.

This poem is a beauty, ahsiam. beauty couldn't have been more perfectly defined by a poetic mind. I love the last two lines specially. obscurity is its ultimacy...

[ahsiam]

Thanks fire for a wonderful and inspiring comment. I am really glad that you liked it. And those two lines are my favourite too. :)