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Mr.K
10-27-2008, 06:38 PM
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lucidnightmares
10-28-2008, 05:08 PM
very dark and harshly written, truthful and haunting.

i especially love these lines....


"Made to live
Moulded by death

We are human."



unfortunately i don`t have a wide enough vocabulary to correctly comment on this, but it did pluck the heart strings i guess i could say.

hard hitting and sorrowful, VERY powerful.

Iv`e been away from the boards for awhile now but i`m very glad this is the first poem i get to read again.
beautifully tragic, i look foreward to reading more from you.