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hoope
10-14-2008, 05:53 PM
I never saw my dad since i was 5 yrs old , i really miss him more than u can imagine & i always believe that i'll see him one day.

All at once i ask myself HOW WOULD MY LIFE BE IF HE WAS AROUND ?...........



Just wanna see you dad
Oh daddy !
Oh my love !
I loved from all my heart

You left me
You went away & gone
but still i want you
but still i love you
I want you back

I have friends
Am good at school
I wanna tell you
Everything about me
Everything in my life

Can i hug you ?
Can i kiss you ?
Can i tell you ?
that "I love you dad "


All what am asking
from this world
All what am asking
from my life
Is to see you
Just Wanna See You Dad........

Silven
10-15-2008, 08:46 PM
I love this type of poetry.

Written just the way I like it, with little regard for grammatical correctness, so long as the message it conveyed correctly - as you feel it!

Thankyou for sharing this.

romantic novel
10-18-2008, 01:29 PM
hoope,,

you are always wonderful

with your poems, I feel as if I swim in another world,,world of reality;not that of

imagination..

I feel Im diving in your heart,your feelings and tears...cry when you cry, smile when you

smile..


Sincere peotry is the REAL poetry,,,

Good Job hoope..


Looking Forward to your new:)

hoope
10-18-2008, 06:07 PM
ur always special in ur replies...& romantic
Thx alot 4 coming by :)