Night Queen

[whitspear]

I joined so i could have a place to post some of my poems and have them read by non faqmily members. I want to know what real people think if you know what i mean. So here it is:

Stepping stones of fire stars
Midnight gown of air
Hairs of darkened shadow bars
Sunset blush of care

Mystery within her eyes
smile or a frown?
Sleeps upon the sunny skies then
Wears the evening crown

Sends the fog and cries the rain
Flashing lightning sight
True sweet love or hurting psin
Soothe in dreaming night

Seductive voice within the breeze
Calling out for you
Kiss you sweet in tidal seas
Forever staying true.

Come to me believe what’s real
Even if you’re blind
For this is what I really feel
I’m the one night find.

My Desire

Your skin is my continent of perfection
I dream of being nowhere else but
In your arms wrapped tight in
Elysium.

Your kiss drips with my desire
I crave your valleys like
The desert craves the rain
Eternally.

Your eyes pierce into my soul
As if you were looking through a window
Capturing my heart in a
Trance.

Your smile is my happiness
Lighting my life like a candle
In the darkness of this world
Illumination.

Your being is my passion
I surrender to your power
Find comfort in your confidence
Content.

[Epistemophile]

i liked 'night queen' better. i liked its sound. the images are woven nicely together. there are distinct lyrical possibilities.