First I must say,

[Louisos]

Make of it what you will.

First I must say,
"I love you."

But

when we are torn apart by the guards of your dear heart,
I hate it
I hate them
I hate you.

"I love you."

It stabs me;
visciously, lovingly, ruthlessly
on this altar of trickery
we are played by them,
I hate it
I hate them
I hate you.

"I love you."
But it's not your fault,
isn't it?

Cheers,
Louis

[romantic novel]

It stabs me;
visciously, lovingly, ruthlessly



Wonderfully written I like it...


cheers:)

[Louisos]

Any criticism lol? this is all I ever seem to get on any forum, kinda starts to go to a 15 year old boy's head xD

No problem? :S :P