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sundays50
10-09-2008, 05:50 PM
heights of immemorial hills;

Dark Muse
10-09-2008, 06:45 PM
This painted an interesting picuture, it was enjoyable to read

Xillus_Xavier
10-09-2008, 09:50 PM
Very entertaining poem.
Enjoyed it immensely.

eyemaker
10-10-2008, 01:24 AM
I fairly enjoyed it...nice poem! the imagery is quite interesting:)

toni
10-10-2008, 11:35 PM
I agree with everyone above. :) Thoroughly enjoyable.

kiz_paws
10-11-2008, 01:53 AM
Yes, I totally agree with you all. This was an enjoyable read. :)

symphony
10-11-2008, 02:14 AM
Enjoyable read, yes, gotta agree. But i felt i'm missing something... dunno if i'm right though, but felt like it has more meaning than the ones it comes clearly with.

Pendragon
10-11-2008, 05:56 AM
Deep poem. There are layers of meaning here to be delved, Encore!