Are you behind the clouds?

[Louisos]

Lately, I’ve been thinking the sun- it works too hard,
and I’d be better off to wonder, about everything.
But maybe, it was only the sun behind the clouds
that made everything seem so nasty, oh well

Is there love
behind the clouds?
Is there joy
behind the clouds?
Is there life
behind the clouds?
Are you behind the clouds?

Cheers,
Louis

[hoope]

short but wonderful..
sometimes words can go beyond everything and deliver the feelings
that we try to hide in inside us..

enjoyed readin it

[eyemaker]

I enjoyed reading it! ;)

[Louisos]

Yeah was just a little thing I thought of in a boring maths class- might make it into song lyrics. (2nd stanza being chorus of some sort)

[romantic novel]

I love it..

Well-written...keep it

:)