I will not let you go

[Louisos]

I will not let you go

Entangled in the roots of sorrow,
I can’t let you go, free
me from this house of terror,
or I can’t let you go,
hunting for the tastes of pleasure,
how can I let you go?
Why do you leave me begging for more?
Do you love to hear me moan?

Satiate my last desire, before
I let you go,
eat my flesh; my heart of fire,
before I let you go,
cry for me,
lie for me,
before I let you go.

You’ve freed me from this house of pleasure,
you’ve given me the tastes of terror;
satiated my last desire,
eaten my flesh; my heart of fire,
you’ve cried for me,
you’ve lied for me,
But I will not let you go.
Cheers,
Louis

[Dark Muse]

This was quite interesting, I really enjoyed it. I particuarly like what you did with the last stanza.

[PrinceMyshkin]

There's a wonderful lyrical swing to this, Louisos!

[Louisos]

Any criticism? :D

[Within Me]

No , really it`s awesome !

[Louisos]

Erm, ok?

[romantic novel]

wonderful, this is really great poem