To A.

[Cellar Door]

The black chateau of your consciousness-
The feel of truth-
What will I do when you are fallen?
There is no loneliness like
ours.

[qimissung]

Wow. I just felt like some large prison door just clanged shut. Powerful. Would you want to use the word 'citadel' instead of 'chateau'? I like the sound of chateau, but citadel might work better with the image of something that is fallen.

[Cellar Door]

That's interesting... I never really thought of using another word. Chateau just sort of popped into my head and refused to leave, but now I have something else to think about. Thanks, Qimissung!

[Xcape]

I love the use of chateau