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Amylian
10-02-2008, 08:03 AM
"Fair N Despair"

Life is no more fair,
Diving hearts into a deep despair,
I am asking: my home, where?
Glowing answers, I need to hear,
I swear,
You hear it not,
No one dares.

Regards,
Amylian
PrinceMyshkin
10-02-2008, 10:51 AM
I appreciate how succinct this is!
romantic novel
10-02-2008, 12:16 PM
One word...AMAZING


I really like it
hoope
10-02-2008, 02:52 PM
Marvelous..
its really well written.. !
Amylian
10-03-2008, 04:56 PM
Thank you guys for your complements and feel free whenever you want to criticize....
qimissung
10-05-2008, 10:50 AM
I love the poignant nature of your poem. This is a place I often live in my own self, and it is hard to capture well on paper. Your have done it.
Schizo-Manic
10-06-2008, 02:58 AM
beautiful things come in small packages simple but cohesive nice poem I enjoyed reading it.