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dibyendra
10-01-2008, 05:47 AM
The ashen sky kept pouring the rain.
It seems it will rain forever.
Yet I have to go.

Passion runs high. Love is
mystical, wrapped with
emotions. This heart anticipates
for you. So desperate to see you.

There you are,
standing, lingering,
in the cold evening. I see
an undying patience in your eyes.

Demure smile of yours,
leaves me speechless. The silence
melts in your warm embrace
into tears of joy.

The subtlety in your affectionate touch
vivifies my soul, and your afterglow,
which lingers on, even after
we bid adieu to each other.

Dark Muse
10-01-2008, 11:17 AM
Beautiful imagery with such moving feeling, of both tenderness and sensuality.

kiz_paws
10-03-2008, 01:20 PM
That was a very moving love poem, Dibyendra. Bravo. :)

dibyendra
10-04-2008, 11:49 AM
Thank you very much! :)

qimissung
10-05-2008, 10:43 AM
This is a beautiful and tender tribute to love. Good one, dibyendra.

dibyendra
10-09-2008, 10:36 PM
Thank you, qimissung, for appreciating this piece! :)

eyemaker
10-10-2008, 01:22 AM
I too like the imagery, there is this compassion and sensuality enveloping the poem! ;) It's simply beautiful. :)

dibyendra
10-11-2008, 11:27 AM
Thanks, Eyemaker! :)