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diamantis
09-22-2008, 05:53 AM
They wanted to explore the unknown,
What a waste, what a waste.
Their past, they sensed,
Was the same unknown to them as
their future,
No turning back,
While they were searching to find,
What they had forgotten before they started to be.

Dark Muse
09-22-2008, 11:45 AM
This was quite interesting. It is quite profound. A few simple words speaking such deapth

romantic novel
09-24-2008, 03:27 PM
This is a very well-developed poem. It speaks the reality.

I really like it ...

thanks for sharing us such a wonderful lines.

Xillus_Xavier
09-24-2008, 06:34 PM
I prefer short poems that still possess an impact on the reader.
This was good.

NikolaiI
03-29-2015, 03:23 PM
Very nice.