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ntropyincarnate
09-20-2008, 06:45 PM
You're the one that loves me,
You're the one who understands.
Let me pour you down my throat
And feel you burn it with your brand.

Take away the numbness
And replace it with your pain.
Let me feel i'm living once,
before my life is drained.

Make me sleep a little while
Before the unkind day.
Sing your eternal lullabies
And rock my life away.

Dark Muse
09-20-2008, 08:28 PM
This had very vivid dark imagery which I quite enjoyed

romantic novel
09-22-2008, 05:42 AM
I really love this poem...so great, well-done :)

ntropyincarnate
09-22-2008, 06:11 PM
Thanks people! :D

qimissung
09-22-2008, 11:23 PM
Beautiful!

firefangled
09-22-2008, 11:36 PM
short and sweet