"In the forest"

[Mr.K]

edit.

[Dark Muse]

It is off to a good start. It has such a serene feeling

[JBI]

You clash your narrative with lyric. It is implied that you are in the forest, by you writing the poem, I cannot see the point of repeating it in every stanza. I am in the forest now seems an unfitting line in this piece, yet you repeat it; why may I ask?

[Tournesol]

Hello Mr. K

I find your detailed reference to the hummingbird rather interesting. Why hummingbirds?