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PrinceMyshkin
09-17-2008, 06:52 PM
To you whom I ought not to address
by name, or directly in the following manner:
I think I love you!
I know I love who I think you are!
I think you want to love me!
I think you already at least half-way do!

But you dare not, as yet,
say my name

Xillus_Xavier
09-17-2008, 08:07 PM
This is excellent poetry PrinceMyshkin.
It really fits the style of writing I admire most
and delivered great content with just a few words.
Well done!

romantic novel
09-18-2008, 08:01 AM
Oh PrinceMyshkin...

Im really moved by these great lines..

i feel you talk about myself.talk in my behalf...

Oh..Why just he say it..and everything will be alright..


Great PrinceMyshkin....Very wonderful poem

paperleaves
09-18-2008, 01:58 PM
This is absolutely perfect. To convey such emotion in so few words is extreme talent.

Sweets America
09-18-2008, 03:03 PM
Great one, Shou! :thumbs_up There is such a yearning for love. This is so you. :)

Xcape
09-18-2008, 09:18 PM
Love it.

amanda_isabel
09-19-2008, 02:11 AM
wow, Uncle Jer. :)