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PrinceMyshkin
09-17-2008, 06:52 PM
To you whom I ought not to address
by name, or directly in the following manner:
I think I love you!
I know I love who I think you are!
I think you want to love me!
I think you already at least half-way do!
But you dare not, as yet,
say my name
Xillus_Xavier
09-17-2008, 08:07 PM
This is excellent poetry PrinceMyshkin.
It really fits the style of writing I admire most
and delivered great content with just a few words.
Well done!
romantic novel
09-18-2008, 08:01 AM
Oh PrinceMyshkin...
Im really moved by these great lines..
i feel you talk about myself.talk in my behalf...
Oh..Why just he say it..and everything will be alright..
Great PrinceMyshkin....Very wonderful poem
paperleaves
09-18-2008, 01:58 PM
This is absolutely perfect. To convey such emotion in so few words is extreme talent.
Sweets America
09-18-2008, 03:03 PM
Great one, Shou! :thumbs_up There is such a yearning for love. This is so you. :)
Xcape
09-18-2008, 09:18 PM
Love it.
amanda_isabel
09-19-2008, 02:11 AM
wow, Uncle Jer. :)
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