my saviour

[jikan myshkin]

My saviour came in the dead of the night
I turned my face away
an angel sold me a song
about how she went away
I gave my money and my time
my debt was always too great
my greed was my salvation
my generosity was my undoing
my soul was shattered
at about eight thirty in the evening
my reflection felt neglected
so I gave it a kiss
and then smashed my mirror
and poured my reflection onto this page
and now you write so noble
brings to my eye a tear
your soul is one that was forgotten
but every soul finds a home
as every heart finds a companion
for this long and lonesome road
to heaven

[Xcape]

and poured my reflection onto this page


I love this line.

Great poem.

[blazeofglory]

My saviour came in the dead of the night
I turned my face away
an angel sold me a song
about how she went away
I gave my money and my time
my debt was always too great
my greed was my salvation
my generosity was my undoing
my soul was shattered
at about eight thirty in the evening
my reflection felt neglected
so I gave it a kiss
and then smashed my mirror
and poured my reflection onto this page
and now you write so noble
brings to my eye a tear
your soul is one that was forgotten
but every soul finds a home
as every heart finds a companion
for this long and lonesome road
to heaven

It is really interesting to read the poem,. full of something that moves us