My First Kiss

[mdwhite]

I was the age of 5, just a little boy
When my little sister had over a friend, and her name was Joy;
I remember they played barbie’s for just a little while;
And I of course was Super Man with my cape of towel;
After a while of bugging them they finally let me play;
I became the astronaut, all the rest of the day;
I flew out in my space ship to save the planet of two;
No matter how many enemies, because victory I knew;
With my space ship and I, not one did I miss;
Why, because every time I returned home,
I got a heroes kiss.

Martin D. White
Author
Living The Simple Life
Simple Life Poetry

[qimissung]

Sweet!

[mazHur]

nice!

[browneyedbailey]

How cute! I love little poems like this. What inspired it?

[mdwhite]

On my poetry forum we play a game call Poetry Games. Someone picks a subject for the week and at the end of the week picks their favorite to pass the torch to. The subject was your first kiss. '
When I wrote this one of the girls commented that she had never been kissed so I wrote this for her:

When two lips touch for the very first time;
Both Hearts stop, and you hear a chime;
With the nerviness of the moment and the excitement of it all;
It is like not paying attention and walking into a wall;
You walk around like a zombie for the next several days;
Dumb founded by the moment in total amaze;
Now that you know what is like to have a very first kiss;
Grab the cutest person around you and
make sure you don’t miss.

[mazHur]

On my poetry forum we play a game call Poetry Games. Someone picks a subject for the week and at the end of the week picks their favorite to pass the torch to. The subject was your first kiss. '
When I wrote this one of the girls commented that she had never been kissed so I wrote this for her:

When two lips touch for the very first time;
Both Hearts stop, and you hear a chime;
With the nerviness of the moment and the excitement of it all;
It is like not paying attention and walking into a wall;
You walk around like a zombie for the next several days;
Dumb founded by the moment in total amaze;
Now that you know what is like to have a very first kiss;
Grab the cutest person around you and
make sure you don’t miss.

this is wonderful!
A miss is as good as a mile,,,so let's never miss!;)

[manny2]

this is really cute! you put it together well : )

[blazeofglory]

This is beautyful

[JBI]

It has some interesting moments, but if you insist on such constant rhymes, you could perhaps benefit from getting Adams' Poetic Designs, as your metrical skill can use some touching up (the uneven line lengths and stresses seem to break the poem up unevenly and puzzlingly).

[carino]

"Youth is young life plus curiosity minus understanding"--- Anthony Brooks

[stephofthenight]

Awwwwwwwwwww so cute :d