Silence, please.

[manny2]

The emptiness within
portrays no distractions nor thoughts.
only utter silence.

a deep breathe revealed at last;
next comes the insanity,
with a mind never at rest.

a wrecking brain with hurtful thoughts,
never at ease, only circles to come.

what should i do?
how do i overcome this mess?
when does it end?

The time is now,
to go back to my rest
and put myself to silence.

eyes shut,
ears covered
a deep breath within;
waiting to be revealed again.

[Dark Muse]

This was really good, I really enjoyed it.

[poetman]

i concurr...

[blazeofglory]

The emptiness within
portrays no distractions nor thoughts.
only utter silence.

a deep breathe revealed at last;
next comes the insanity,
with a mind never at rest.

a wrecking brain with hurtful thoughts,
never at ease, only circles to come.

what should i do?
how do i overcome this mess?
when does it end?

The time is now,
to go back to my rest
and put myself to silence.

eyes shut,
ears covered
a deep breath within;
waiting to be revealed again.

It speaks of or I say derogatively, this vomits ideas that need to be poured out.

[manny2]

thanks everyone, i'm still working on it.. has many improvements to come! : )

[birgitta_nell@y]

This is great- I love it! Well done!!

[romantic novel]

This is really really great peom..

I really like it...

Well done