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dibyendra
09-08-2008, 07:51 AM
Now that the stars are gleaming,
the sky is on fire. Your face is bright
as the moon, and the reflection
of the universe is in your glistering eyes.

The fragrances in the zephyr caress
as your sleek hair flutters toward my face,
enticing for a passionate kiss
that we both cry for more.

Love is a chain, an obsession, a fire,
a fear, a pure passion, and a desire
that is insatiable, and unappeasable
when the soulmates swim in the ocean of love.

paperleaves
09-08-2008, 11:43 AM
The imagery you use is fantastic and awe-inspiring! Thank you for sharing :)

qimissung
09-08-2008, 12:21 PM
dibyendra, you use some beautiful imagery that lifts this above the ordinary.

blazeofglory
09-11-2008, 11:13 AM
Now that the stars are gleaming,
the sky is on fire. Your face is bright
as the moon, and the reflection
of the universe is in your glistering eyes.

The fragrances in the zephyr caress
as your sleek hair flutters toward my face,
enticing for a passionate kiss
that we both cry for more.

Love is a chain, an obsession, a fire,
a fear, a pure passion, and a desire
that is insatiable, and unappeasable
when the soulmates swim in the ocean of love.

Full of menageries ideas. You proved images can make a beautiful poem.