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Dark Muse
08-31-2008, 03:37 PM
Mornings Breath

The first breath of morning
flush upon the skin
like the brush of rose petals
in the wind.

A quietude that cannot be put to words
but felt and understood
in a precious moment
where all stand still at peace

A subtle realization
all too soon lost
a beauty of the harmony of the soul

Gentle caressing
as the warmth of the sun
seeps into a tingling breeze
not to be rivaled

In an eyes blink
like only a passing dream
it slips away too easily
disturbed, a shatter
like fragile moth wings.

Justin Rockwell
08-31-2008, 07:26 PM
Nice poem, I like the description and the structure alot.

please return the feedback...

http://www.online-literature.com/forums/showthread.php?t=37748

Dark Muse
08-31-2008, 07:27 PM
Thank you

goldenrod
08-31-2008, 11:42 PM
I would that I could feel such moments, but alas, the night is broken into multiple segements for my sleeping pattern...

goldenrod.