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whitman
08-31-2008, 01:33 PM
The wind of a mirror took
my photograph in heaven.
The phantom skyscrapers
on the moon gave me my
rebirth drinking wine from
the horn of a unicorn.

Hourglasses snow down
from the half-finished ice
sky being constructed by
the orgasmic bees.
My shivering incarnations
rehearse the death of
the earth.Stranded i wait
for the earth to have that
certain dream.

Justin Rockwell
09-01-2008, 10:50 AM
Nice structure, but the concept of this poem is a bit blurred, nice indirect description though.

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