"More than anything I love life"

[PrinceMyshkin]

"More than anything I love life,"
I read in a woman's profile
on one of these dating sites
that have become the single's dances,
match-ups by friends,
bars and alleyways
of our romantic search.

"More than anything I love life,"
I read and my heart goes out to her!
To her effort to convey the essence
of herself, the lovable,
worship-worthy essence of herself.

Look what a wonderful,
singular, positive individual I am!
Oh, there are others no doubt
who love life but
"more than anything"?

I'm me, I'm here, I'm waiting!
Come and find me!
Come, and we
will love life together
more than anything!

But come, please,
only come!

[Justin Rockwell]

I really enjoyed the tone/mood of this poem, it's really vibrant amd presents a colorful mindset to the reader/audience. Keep up the good work.

please return the feedback...

http://www.online-literature.com/forums/showthread.php?t=37748

[PrinceMyshkin]

I really enjoyed the tone/mood of this poem, it's really vibrant amd presents a colorful mindset to the reader/audience. Keep up the good work.

please return the feedback...

http://www.online-literature.com/forums/showthread.php?t=37748

Thanks Justin. I did listen to the audio but hip-hop doesn't do anything for me, I don't usually get it and couldn't pick up on any one theme and follow it all the way through.

[Justin Rockwell]

I'm not talking about the hip-hop songs on there, I'm talking about the 2 poems "Epiphany" and "2 Lives in 1", the only hip songs are "This Chick" and CYPHER'N", just skip past those 2.

[Umbilical]

I really love this.


in a way I feel that I've found this with someone,
only I've fu.cked it up a bit but only to test how much I love life
and I promise you I love it enough to fix it up and love her even more.

^ true story.


I hope you are well and thank you for your poem

[goldenrod]

Life!

a mystery from start to finish.
In no way in it,
does that, my joy diminish!
Thinking myself thoroughly heaven blest.
Being born, in spite of, someday,
having to face...

Death!


goldenrod.

[blazeofglory]

"More than anything I love life,"
I read in a woman's profile
on one of these dating sites
that have become the single's dances,
match-ups by friends,
bars and alleyways
of our romantic search.

"More than anything I love life,"
I read and my heart goes out to her!
To her effort to convey the essence
of herself, the lovable,
worship-worthy essence of herself.

Look what a wonderful,
singular, positive individual I am!
Oh, there are others no doubt
who love life but
"more than anything"?

I'm me, I'm here, I'm waiting!
Come and find me!
Come, and we
will love life together
more than anything!

But come, please,
only come!


Yes friend life is the sweetest thing, and we love it more than anything in the world, incomparably as a matter of fact.