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jikan myshkin
08-30-2008, 01:12 PM
i stole your kiss

i gave it back the next day
goldenrod
08-30-2008, 04:14 PM
It's still a felony!:(

goldenrod.
Kafka's Crow
08-30-2008, 08:57 PM
i stole your kiss

i gave it back the next day


Returned with thanks, the kiss you sent
It renders my resolution bent.

It has been round, doesn't seem sound
A kiss that's been to another town.

I do not want, I can not take
Oh take it back, for heaven's sake.

In the end, for my own sake too
I know it brings your raging flu!

My nose is blocked, I'm feeling hoarse
Receive, no thanks, this Trojan Horse!

(Prince Myshkin)
PrinceMyshkin
08-31-2008, 08:25 AM
i stole your kiss

i gave it back the next day

With added interest, I hope! Thank you.
PrinceMyshkin
08-31-2008, 08:26 AM
Returned with thanks, the kiss you sent
It renders my resolution bent.

It has been round, doesn't seem sound
A kiss that's been to another town.

I do not want, I can not take
Oh take it back, for heaven's sake.

In the end, for my own sake too
I know it brings your raging flu!

My nose is blocked, I'm feeling hoarse
Receive, no thanks, this Trojan Horse!

(Prince Myshkin)

May I say, brilliant? Witty as a simile for wittiness!