a kiss

[ahsiam]

lust thats held for so long
as in a cloudy day-i have lost
in smoke,
where layer of tissues protrudes
in your face.

[Dark Muse]

This is beautiful and so profound for a few short lines

[symphony]

where layer of tissues protrudes
in your face.
These 2 lines are of the kind which will hang in the air hours after you've read or heard them... Excellent.


( And you havent showed it to me first! :crash: )

[ahsiam]

Thanks dark for finding a time to read. It made me happy that u liked it... :)


hihi! I thought i will get scolded for using a whole new thread for a tiny poem. I didnt know someone will like it!! :P


Symph, it was in my art copy beside one of my "creation" . I showed it to u guys. Raw saw it where were u? :-*